I need critique.

I did a shoot for my best friend who is an aspiring model and I just need some c&c, so if some of you photographers would chime in, it would help out a tonn.

1.

full size image

2.

full size image

3.

full size image

4.

full size image

5.

full size image

chicks with blue eyes lol

i love the clarity of the pics and the contrast + lightning. very very nice #2's my fave

You forgot your name stamp/border on the last one, hehe

haha, I know, I just got lazyyy

def some nice shots. and shes pretty cute hahaha. but gum in the first pic isnt working tho, hahaha. but really, some nice shots for sure.

yea, that gum has been bothering me

lol, edit it out then hahah

ok, I will.

1 & 4 need some work IMO. #2 is definitely the best.

Honestly, and I feel like a pretty big douche by saying this, but modeling standards being what they are, she seems like she'd need some touch up / airbrushing work to get up to bar. I feel bad saying that because she's a really cute girl, but modeling is harsh & extremely critical. I can't say I see her being at that level really.

#4 just isn't a flattering angle for her. #3 seems like its lost between being a close-up shot and being a shot that requires background balance. The only other definitive thing I would say, is that #1 was edited too much with a gaussian blur. If she was supposed to be such the focus in that picture, then the rest of the frame shouldn't be there anyways. If you're going to have that frame, then don't blur it out so much IMO.

Really for her to be a model she has to be comfortable in front of a camera. The only one that gives that vibe off (to me) is #2. The others seem to come across as either really staged or pretty uncomfortable for her.

the pics are very clear and she aite.