Well you asked our opinion, so I'm going to give you mine. Please don't take offense because I'm sure it wasn't your fault.
I think the from bumper looks like crap. One of my biggest pet peves is when body shops paint things that they're not supposed to. In this instance, your upper and lower grills. They should be black. IMO the way it is now makes it look cheap, and like the shop that did the painting was too lazy to mask off the appropriate parts.
The rest of the car looks good though. Great start.